REVIEW: Spirit Guides and Shit Eaters


Rating: 4 out of 5.

Watkins writes with comedic flair and a healthy edge of nihilism in an emotive and passionate exploration into the messiness of human beings.


‘It’s actually a beautiful thing to be able to not have to search far and wide for meaning.’ 

It was a privilege to attend the Camden People’s Theatre to review Linsey Watkin’s Spirit guides and Shit Eaters, a beautifully written two-hander that captivated its audience with witty dialogue, philosophical musings, and emotionally stirring performances given by Lucy Buncombe and Kieran Robson. 

The play (directed by Lucy Campbell) follows Jude and Ash, as they become an influential presence in each other’s lives following a meet-cute in a very unlikely place – a graveyard. 

Jude and Ash are initially portrayed as each other’s opposite; Jude lives a life filled with excess and feels overwhelmed by choice, while Ash feels a debilitating lack of self-assurance and direction. Within these contradictions, they live and breathe as intricately developed characters who connect, oscillate, and unravel one another’s sense of self, leaving the other stripped back and vulnerable. We learn as the play progresses that what truly binds them together is fear; unequivocal, all-consuming fear. 

The play often oscillates between sharp realism, whimsical musings, and raw, truthful meditations on mortality. Its non-linear form worked well, and the use of space and lighting to show connection and detachment was effective. Buncombe and Robson gave powerful performances, skillfully delivering lengthy monologues with a rhythmic elegance while allowing space for human hesitation, both capturing the woefulness and indulgence of the characters as well as their vulnerability and sincerity. 

The plot then swerves, taking a direction that is unexpected and heightens the drama and intrigue, as Jude and Ash begin to live vicariously through the deceased subjects pulled from Jude’s research. They begin to memorialise the people who lived their lives before them, building mosaics of people made up of romanticised ideas and fragmented pieces of their former lives. Mortality thus stands out as a key theme at the forefront of this play, as through death, the characters find ways to live – and to feel alive. 

Spirit Guides presents a litany of creative, clever and bold ideas; perhaps it could be even stronger if some of them were further fleshed out. I felt that the concept of the protagonist living a day in the life of a different deceased person per week was an incredibly interesting one, and one that would have been nice to explore further. However, it sometimes felt like a subheading of sorts, serving as a means to bring the characters together, but not a completely developed and explored idea. 

Thus, the relationships of the character forms the play’s core, which sometimes felt a little unsatisfying due to their relationship never truly feeling completely authentic. Their connection felt intense, but built upon unreliable and easily demolishable foundations. Perhaps this could be an encapsulation of the irrefutable passion young people navigate the world with; with vigour as well as a fickleness, occasionally flimsy in their convictions as they build upon their sense of self. 

Thus, I felt that the dramaturgical shape of the play could be reworked to centre the plot point aforementioned, which would allow for more space for their journey as individuals. As Jude poses to Ash, 

Choose someone – who do you want to be?’ 

I felt invited to wonder who I would be, if I could live as someone else. What kind of life I would choose for myself, and what that choice would say about me. 

I was therefore somewhat perplexed when the female character becomes a stereotype of what she seemingly didn’t want to become – but perhaps we as the audience are witness to the circumstances that teaches her what she does want – something that is sure, and a fulfillment in looking after others and being loved. 

Ultimately, I felt that Spirit Guides was insightful, entertaining and very relatable. It captures the feeling of helpless desperation upon seeing a bookshelf full of books, knowing you want to devour them all but that you somehow won’t get round to it. It captures the pain of not feeling enough, and too much, all at once. It paints with the colours of loneliness and the confusion of being young, the anxiety of not feeling like you have many, (-if not any-) of the answers of who to be and how to be. It touches on what it means to need someone else’s clarification that you exist, and not just that, but that your existence is meaningful. That one’s existence only matters if it means something, to someone. 

Watkins also meditates on this within the ideology of making and of creating art; touching on the impact of art when profiting off of someone else’s accomplishments, and the ethics of artistic collaboration and ownership. Watkins writes with comedic flair and a healthy edge of nihilism in an emotive and passionate exploration into the messiness of human beings.

REVIEW: Dragging Your Heels


Rating: 3 out of 5.

A joyful queer musical, Dragging Your Heels promises music, sparkles, and a dose of delightful crowd work


Ben has just gotten divorced. After twenty years on a farm with his (recently ex) wife, he returns to his hometown and singledom. Working as a contractor with his new friend Callum (Tafadzwa Madubeko), Ben (Terry Geo) believes he can see his bleak future stretching out before him. Contract work, a small flat that “smells like cat piss” and an anxious temperament leaves him a fair bit less than enthusiastic about his prospects. Ben, however, has a secret dream. For as long as he can remember he yearned to work as a stand up comedian. He’s been telling jokes for all his life. As far as he is concerned, he is pretty funny. He’s got his material down. There is just one small problem: Ben has debilitating stage fright. 

Callum, ever the encouraging best friend, has a pretty decent idea. He takes Ben to a drag performance by the great Tammy Scowls (Dolly Diamond) who, conveniently, happens to be a close personal friend of his. Herein the central question is asked: can a builder become a drag queen? 

Dragging Your Heels is a heart-warming piece that explores the uncomfortable yet exhilarating journey of pursuing your life’s mission. Interspersed with songs and comedy, the production is a sweet take on how your ambitions may approach you in unexpected ways. Geo and Madubeko are charming as the central characters of the play’s storyline, and Dolly Diamond quite literally shines through as the hilarious comedian she embodies both on stage and in real life. Dolly Diamond’s comedy woven between the overarching storyline left the audience in a fit of giggles, anxious – in more ways than one – to be the next victim of her crowd work. She offers sharp wit and self awareness, embracing the aesthetic and energy of fringe theatre that we know and love. To watch her leave the stage was to impatiently await her return. 
This eccentric mix of comedy, drag, and music was a great vessel for this storyline. While the songs may have appeared somewhat randomly, they were embodied with enticing enthusiasm by the cast as a whole. Ultimately, the production was an encouraging, wholesome tale that will leave audiences hopeful. In the face of a harsh world hellbent on obfuscating all that is wonderful about queerness and drag, Dragging Your Heels is a great way to give that bigoted public the metaphorical (or perhaps literal) finger.

REVIEW: Tales of A Jane Austen Spinster


Rating: 4 out of 5.

Painfully relatable and tirelessly entertaining!


Unlucky in love? Tired of endless swiping? Tales of a Jane Austen Spinster might just be for you. It is a hilarious and unfortunately realistic adventure in modern romance, or rather, lack thereof. Liliana claws her way off the pages of an incomplete Austen novel in hopes of making her author finish her story; finding Austen to be long-since dead, she ventures into the modern world and quickly discovers both how much and how little the world has progressed. 

Written and performed by Alexandra Jorgensen, this one-woman show is a woman’s delight. The writing is undeniably witty. Mixing laugh out loud comedy with not so subtle jabs at modern society, it’s enjoyable from start to finish. It’s a very conversational piece; Liliana speaks directly to the audience throughout, inviting us into the world as she understands it.

Jorgensen is a wonderful actress. Her high, affected voice and expressive face blend beautifully with the class and charm of a Jane Austen heroine. She oozed warmth and relatablility, putting voice to all the insecurities that pound away in the minds of women. Jorgensen did have several unfortunate line stumbles that disrupted the flow of her performance. 

The details that help make a performance were well designed. The set was simple but immediately recognizable as the remnants of days past; the little hidden touches of modernity helped ease the viewers into the modern age. Jorgensen’s costume was beautiful. Delicate and classically tailored, paired with an elegant updo the image was only disrupted by her too-shiny, satin pink ballet shoes. 

Setting the story in the Jane Austen House Museum was quite brilliant; it immediately created an environment that blended “faction and fiction”, as Jorgensen puts it. One of the few stumbling blocks Tales of a Jane Austen Spinster hit was the sequence during which Liliana explored the world outside her museum. It was not as smooth or clear as the scenes in the house and it dragged. The voiceovers trickled throughout were all flat and uncomfortably robotic; their AI style sound detracted from the story. 

Tales of a Jane Austen Spinster is criticism at its most enjoyable. It is a love letter to the woman that questions where she belongs and wonders if her standards are too high. Relatable, hilarious, and honest, Tales of a Jane Austen Spinster is not one to miss.

REVIEW: Jonty O’Callaghan’s Got Some Notes


Rating: 4.5 out of 5.

Cleverly constructed silliness where every sketch lands


A newsreader sitting down to interview a self-help guru; a caretaker nursing the hangover from last night’s swingers party, and the gnarled presenter of “World’s Deadliest Animals” walk into a bar, or at least a theatre above a bar. Hilarity ensues. Jonty O’Callaghan’s one-man sketch show is a wonderfully wry skewering of everyday moments, which has the audience laughing and clapping throughout its 50 minutes.

There’s always a risk that a solo sketch show ends up excruciating, as there’s no co-conspirator to toss them a lifeline when a joke fails to land, or to maintain a skit’s momentum. Jonty overcomes this both through sheer force of personality, and by co-opting the audience as a second cast member. They supply not only the laughs, but also a host of characters: from the author of a book on the meaning of life reading a pre-prepared statement, to a schoolboy being told off by their teacher. During these moments, Jonty has plenty of jokes himself, ensuring audience engagement only ever enhances an already funny performance in its own right.

These interactions are handled carefully, building a genuine dialogue between performer and audience. This collaborative warmth ensures participants have the freedom to shape each sketch into something unique, but if an answer is short or awkward Jonty moves straight to the next gag. The result is a small crowd that leans into every interaction. They’re genuinely excited to be involved.

The overarching narrative is that the show is an audition to find the ‘ideal sketch show audience’. This is a neat way to move between sketches, and also genuinely hilarious as O’Callaghan’s overly officious casting director queries audience CV claims, and runs through nightmare audition tropes – the fixed smile and hollow praise, and the dreaded “don’t call us, we’ll call you”.

Every sketch’s comedy is multi-layered, never content to milk its first idea for laughs. A particular highlight is a PE teacher who takes his Primary School bowling league way too seriously, sourcing gags not just from the situation’s absurdity, but also astute observations about sports media and lively audience interaction. There’s also a guy confessing his addiction to playing the guitar at parties, whose inevitable musical outburst provides a nice change of pace towards the show’s end.

Each sketch follows a clear formula: take an everyday event (a sickeningly cheerful children’s TV presenter sits down to read a bedtime story), insert a curveball (the story is about marital breakdown), and then look for new places to take this idea, throwing in a good dose of observational humour along the way. It would be great to see the creativity Jonty could unleash when freed from these constraints, but it’s undeniable that it works – every single skit lands and none outstay their welcome, which is almost unheard of for a sketch show at any level.

These successes are a result of skilful writing – every line reaches for new, untapped hilarity – and also the warmth of both the show and its delivery. Jonty O’Callaghan’s Got Some Notes is like a cosy late-night lock-in with your funniest friend – everyone’s included, and you all do a lot of laughing.

This Camden Fringe run has just one show left, taking place on a Monday afternoon, and despite its inconvenient scheduling deserves to be packed out. This genuinely hilarious collection of character-driven skits zips along quickly and leaves the audience hungry for more. There’s no doubt that Jonty O’Callaghan has a bright future ahead of him – see him before he’s famous.

Jonty O’Callaghan’s Got Some Notes has its final show at the Etcetera Theatre on 18th August at 3pm. Tickets can be purchased here.

REVIEW: MISS


Rating: 5 out of 5.

 Bold, hilarious, meticulously executed and beyond thought-provoking


If you have ever muttered the words ‘those who can’t, teach, ’ I dare you to see this show. It is bold, hilarious, meticulously executed and beyond thought-provoking. Miss is a 60-minute love letter to teachers. It runs at Lion and Unicorn Theatre, and quite frankly, it is like nothing I have seen this year at The Camden Fringe. 

Lead actress Meg Coslett plays Miss, a teacher who guides us through her daily schedule while describing every aspect of the school, her students and other teachers. The rest of the cast of three does a phenomenal job performing every stereotype you can remember from your days in uniform (and more). Multi-roling is a skill not all actors possess, and James Coward, Joe Sefton and Georgia Maguire excel in this area of expertise – their commitment to physicality, accents and mannerisms. was enthralling. Every new character introduced gets vocal approval from the audience as they reminisce on their years in secondary school, which is clear evidence of Coslett’s strong script. On the night I attended, Coslett took the opportunity to interact with audience members due to friendly heckling from who I can only assume were teachers in the crowd. If that’s not approval, then what is?

Phoebe Rowell John directs Coslett as she stares the audience in their eyes and unravels her stream of consciousness. The intimate act of breaking the fourth wall for the full 60 minutes creates an immediate relationship with the room — a clear example of what a teacher is to a student: a mentor, a safe space, and a guide. Sometimes we felt like students in her classroom, and other times we were her best friends, and then just when we thought we understood the plot, emotional twists brought us to the edge of our seats. 

Never did we delve too deep into a heavier topic that is relevant to secondary schools; drug trafficking, eating disorders or self-harm, but Coslett hovered over each, dedicating just enough time to impact an audience and make us listen, but not force us to understand — this is a gift as someone who has sat in many theatres as of late feeling lecture.  

A significant moment was the explosive release Miss had due to frustration with the safeguarding system in place, leading her to erupt and explain what is wrong with the education system and the importance of her job. The room went silent, and you could hear a pin drop… It was chilling. The audience didn’t switch off or not listen, but sympathised and felt a sliver of guilt for not taking the situation more seriously. When a writer can win an audience over so thoroughly throughout the majority of the piece, there’s no losing in the end, and Miss had won us over.

Every prop was used out of necessity, every character was relevant to the storyline, and every word was spoken with conviction to have us thinking ‘What were my teachers thinking when I was in maths class’ and then worrying a little about the answer. School was the best and the worst for most of us, and Coslett captured all of this in an hour. Whether you heard your story, your siblings, your friends or that person from the year above, you knew the story and understood the assignment at hand. 

Miss is a work of art that I recommend anyone to witness – teachers are so often overlooked and thrown aside, and what Coslett has done with Miss is remind us that they have an astronomical task at hand. Teachers work with children at their most primitive years to help shape them into the human beings they will become. A task at which they receive little support or recognition. How this has been created so it is understandable and digestible whilst glazed in nostalgia, wit and laughter, I don’t know – go and see it! 
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REVIEW: Târgoviște Strays


Rating: 5 out of 5.

Creatively complex conflict explored perfectly in its polished yet intimate setting


Writer-producer Emma Novak has struck Fringe Theatre gold with this riveting, personal piece about the impact of Romania’s communist regime. Directed by Hector Smith, we follow a solitary solider called “Novak”, played superbly by Samuel Collins-Webb, as he writes letters to his mother during his time in a military re-education camp as punishment for trying to flee to Czechoslovakia. Dealing with themes of hope, paranoia and survival, this production has been expertly crafted by its tiny team.  

The atmosphere is already established as we enter the room: Novak is sat on small metal bed with scratchy woolen blanket, writing furiously into his journal. A black and white TV is perched on a wooden side table. The sounds of Romanian radio propaganda songs play on loop; jaunty and unsettling. The “strays” in the title, we learn are a double meaning. Referring both to the literal stray dogs left abandoned by citizens in the streets, and the people who slip through the cracks, such as our protagonist, forced to wonder when liberation will ever come.

The heart of the piece is of course Collins-Webb, and Novak’s writing is so sharp that we are immediately invested in his character, based on her own father. We follow as he writes love poems for a fellow inmate to his ever increasing number of girlfriends, we follow him as he discusses the virtues of contraband VHS, and we follow him as he muses mournfully on his increasing desperation and despair that he will never be released.

Considering the small creative team, the technical capabilities of this show are sensational and pack a far bigger punch than you would expect, filling its intimate space. The sound design is spectacular. We are shown archival video footage of dictator Ceausescu one moment, then a cut to a 1980s Hollywood montage the next, then cut to spoken word overlapping radio broadcasts and back to silence again. Here media is used to show, rather than relying on the character to tell. Quick musical transitions and sound motifs are matched by Collins-Webb’s masterful tracking of the myriad cues he has to meet for this pint-sized production. Capabable of quickly changing characters, he has such heart and charisma, demonstrating the personal fractures of a life caught up in the fight for national democracy. I couldn’t believe how invested I was in his character and his invisible stray pet dog called Rat.

This show not only tackles head on themes of military abuse and corruption, but also the human elements of being simply a poet with a past- references to the soldier’s family life and his friendship with an inmate add touches of heart and even humour. My sole criticism were the movement sections- they were too infrequent and short (and on the nose)- if they are to be kept, they should be really invested in or just ditch them.

Ultimately, I feel this show was incredibly well written, well produced and well performed. I felt a connection to the character and understood the context within which it takes place, as well as asking questions about democracy, communism and about what we all do to survive if we need to. It’s such a well-polished piece considering its student roots.

Slick in its simplicity, Târgoviște Strays allows a single person’s story to resonate through a regime and in doing so, provide a thoroughly nuanced perspective on a past that is indeed not so far removed from the current political climate.

REVIEW: SUNK INTO THE EARTH


Rating: 4 out of 5.

A gripping play that deserves a bigger stage


Premiering this year on the Camden Fringe, Sunk Into The Earth is an original play written by Charlotte Ritter about murder, sisterly bonds and the lengths we go for those we love.

It opens out on five friends having a casual pizza and wine night. Their dynamics reveal themselves as you watch them chatting: a group of queer policewomen, Gwyn (Jillian Osbourne) is the loud, honest, token heterosexual; Julie (Caro Vinden) and Hypatia (Isabelle Dickey) are married, and expecting a baby; Lilith (Theo Ambrosini) is their fierce and charming housemate and Joan (Natalie Haven) is…Joan! The love and fondness they have for one another radiates from the intimate dialogue and the actors themselves.

The sudden arrival of Salame, portrayed by Ritter herself, throws the relaxed evening into chaos. Lilith is particularly outraged, and it’s revealed to the audience that Salame has just been released from prison, having served time for murdering her sister’s abusive husband. Salame is both unapologetic and withdrawn, a woman caught in a web of devastating trauma and murderous loyalty. As the play progresses, Salame begins to untangle this web with Lilith’s help, and, in a bittersweet end, finally free herself.

The tale unfolds through intimate conversations between the friends, and tense conversations between Salame and her sister Tallulah (Liz Kent). The dialogue is natural in a way that envelopes you in the group’s world, mimicking how real friends talk to each other. Ritter successfully marries light and dark as the play traverses difficult topics such as loss, abuse and codependence with surprising humour and sensitivity.

The action takes place across two different settings: the friends’ flat and a secluded spot in the park where the sisters meet. The use of the small stage was very effective: the delineation between garden, kitchen and living room was clear despite the minimal props and space. It was impressive how they completely transported the audience to the park setting by simply changing the lighting and adding birdsong. They made compelling use of the transitions between settings, as the actors sometimes intentionally overlapped between scenes, symbolic of the how the two settings and the moods that pervade them are inextricable and intertwined.

Whilst the script is loaded and intricate, it’s mostly easy to follow and punchy in the right places. However, there were a few places where the dialogue would benefit from tightening. Flaws in the writing were felt with Joan’s character, who didn’t have a subplot of her own, and didn’t propel the plot forward in any discernible way. Whilst Haven’s skilled acting made Joan feel lovable and real, she isn’t as fleshed out or defined as she should be.

Every single member of this cast brought an individual flair and raw feeling in their performance. Despite having less stage time than her fellow cast, Kent stood out with her powerfully delivered monologue in which she directly addresses the audience, inviting us to feel her grief and guilt with her. Charlotte Ritter’s portrayal of Salame was also really impactful, subtly conveying the emotions of someone trying to be strong whilst crumbling within. Honourable mention to Jillian Osbourne as the energy she brought to Gwyn was really unique and memorable.

Sunk Into The Earth is a gripping drama with twists aplenty, guaranteed to draw you in with its heartfelt writing and have you on the edge of your seats ‘til the very last second. It’s a play that could really go far with a few refinements and genuinely deserves a bigger audience.  Four stars!

REVIEW: Bound By The Wind


Rating: 3.5 out of 5.

“Ambitiously reimagine the legend of Mulan as some simulation video game”


Blending video games and theatre with a script heavy on feminist and discourse, Bound by the Wind is a deeply ambitious production that strike serious questions of freedom, authorship, and mythic identity. Directed and written by Xinyue (Sammi) Xing, the play reimagines the legend of Mulan no longer a national epic, instead a simulation video game where Mulan’s fate is constantly written, revised and loaded.

A raised platform upstage seems to house the “game world,” while the downstage “real world” hosts interactions that are slippery and meta. A staircase connects the two – a literal and symbolic space for decisions, transitions, and glitches. As the narrative unfolds, Mulan (Fangnan Zhao) finds herself only a character in a video game, together trapped with her supposed enemy, Rouran’s Enkhtuyaa (Hui Chen). This game-world is created by Mulan, the deity (Sammi Xing).

The plot hinges on her choice to spare a Rouran prisoner, Enkhtuyaa, played with affecting innocence and a warm spark by Hui Chen. This decision sets the two on a fragmented journey, one that pulls apart gender roles, Confucian legacies, and digital myth-making. Chen’s performance is a highlight: her Enkhtuyaa is impulsive, unfiltered, and playfully anachronistic, like a character pulled from an anime visual novel and dropped into the battlefield.

If Enkhtuyaa provides the heart, Fangnan (Rebecca) Zhao’s turn as a war general attempts to provide the spine. While Zhao’s commitment is clear, the role demands a level of commanding masculinity that her performance doesn’t fully land, leaving the triangle of power, resistance, and tradition slightly off-balance.

Textually, the script fires off some genuinely beautiful lines, such as “We do not tame eagles. They choose us.” However, the dialogues between Mulan and Enkhtuyaa often feel disembodied and disconnected. Feminist ideas are present explicitly, but they occasionally veer too heavily into theoretical, as if watching two feminist philosophers debating ideology rather than organically developing two characters. 

The soundscape, designed by Jiaye Wang, and the original score by Yutong (Jocelyn) Jia, aim for lyrical fluidity but currently skew more chaotic. They start late and end abruptly, and sometimes overwhelm the dialogues. Still, there’s clear intent here, and a better fade-in/fade-out structure might improve. 

Visually, Ruolin Lei’s bare stage holds surprising weight. Though minimal in design, it allows the audience to project possibilities that echo the game-like mechanics. But the absence of indicative visual cues in the first half means the eventual revelation of the “game world” doesn’t quite illustrate as striking with the impact it might. With more nuance visual foreshadowing, the twist could register with greater impact.

The stage combat sequences are exceptionally well-curated and visually beautiful. I enjoyed them quite much.  Each fight seems to serve a clear purpose: fighting to win, fighting to prove oneself, or fighting to break through fate. These intentions come through clearly and are effective. With further refinement, these moments could approach the quality of contemporary dance, especially if paired more deliberately with lighting and music.

Bound by the Wind bears great potential. While a bit uneven at the moment, its core ambition is commendable. If the production can thread its bold concepts more tightly with emotional stakes and character logic, this could evolve into something ground-breaking.

REVIEW: Ghost from a Perfect Place


Rating: 2.5 out of 5.

Cellar Door Theatre’s revival of Ridley’s contentious gothic tragicomedy gets points for endeavour, but doesn’t connect.


Cellar Door Theatre are taking us back to the heyday of what critic Alex Sierz once termed ‘in-yer-face’ theatre: a mode of bare-knuckle, confrontational performance that’s resolutely out of vogue on the Fringe circuit at the moment – to its detriment, some might say. Phillip Ridley’s Ghost from a Perfect Place kicks off with the return of Travis Flood to his old stomping ground in East London. The self-styled preeminent gentleman-gangster of Bethnal Green in the 60s, Flood is back after a lengthy sojournment in Hollywood (he claims), whereupon he finds the place now in the hands of the Disciples – a gang of young women led by the quasi-deified Rio Sparkes. Seemingly drawn to her power and charisma on a first meeting, Flood’s visit to the flat she shares with her grandmother Torchie catalyses a deluge of traumatic revelations that peel back the halcyon sheen of the aestheticised gangsterism of a bygone era to reveal its poisoned heart.

Even before Portishead and DJ Shadow make their (ever so slightly tacked-on) soundtrack appearances, Ghost from a Perfect Place succeeds in feeling firmly rooted in a 90s mode of punkish earnestness. Director Brittany Rex and co. shirk the post-post-modern flourishes of self-referential snark that typify the space right now (even in revivals), and there’s a refreshing quality to watching a young company full-throatedly commit to a weighty piece without the safety-net of irony beneath them. 

But in its execution, it’s fairly wide of the mark. The pacing is fatally languid at times, an effect compounded by a general samey-ness that pervades the piece’s lengthy and admittedly challenging monologues in particular. As the aged, Ozymandias-figure of Flood, Brian Arts manages to ooze a serpentine kind of sociopathy, his prowling physicality and rasping east-end drawl making him every inch the ghost of gangsters past: it’s a solid impression. But it also obscures most of the sly charm and charisma that made Flood who he was, which leaves him seeming more cartoon than tragic antihero. Karen Holly as Torchie never quite reaches escape velocity from a slightly anodyne brand of gentle kookiness, even if fragments of her rose-tinted memories achieve a measure of poignancy. The Disciples are a real hit-and-miss gang. Canitta Hart as Rio has tonnes of presence, but none of the magnetic authority of a nouvelle-prophetess, nor the febrile unpredictability of a young woman born and raised in trauma. Fatima Makhzoum and Maria Anthony (as Disciples Miss Sulphur and Miss Kerosene respectively) bring as much fortissimo energy as they can muster to their zany acolytes, but the problem is that they’re so busy being wacky that they risk functioning as merely screwball comic relief. There’s a lack of depth there that risks trivialising the thematic substructure that the production is trying to establish.

There are absolutely moments in this piece that feel deftly judged and elegantly intuited. Roger Godfrey’s set is clear and extremely well-constructed for a show of this scale; Rex’s staging is almost always watchable and fluid – a few bizarre dramaturgical and stylistic decisions aside. Its greatest asset is undoubtedly Ridley’s language, which, when given space to cut through, conjures a bruising (sur)reality all its own. But in the final estimation, Cellar Door just aren’t quite up to the task on a technical level. Considered as a whole, the piece feels lightweight and bloodless, the characters flat and archetypical – like Brechtian signifiers dropped into a play that demands we experience them as fractured, tortured souls in purgatorial agony. A combination of this same caricaturism and dialogue beats that regularly flirt with playing the gag rather than the moment, hollows out the horror, sadness and grief that seem key to the theatrical world we’re in here. Far from feeling provocative or dangerous, it’s surprisingly tame – with the stakes so underplayed at times that it’s hard to find any of the violence or heartbreak particularly meaningful.

This isn’t to say that Ridley’s brutal thematic preoccupations, his text’s mordant humour, or the frequent detours into trancelike oneirism are easy to manage. On the contrary, it’s notoriously difficult tonal territory to navigate; drawing out GFAPP’s uniquely ghastly vision of an almost spiritualised fetishisation of violent power and lingering trauma is eye-of-the-needle work. Cellar Door have bet on themselves with a challenging undertaking and, never one to discourage risk in fringe spaces, I feel they should be proud of themselves for doing so. But purely on the level of theatrical experience, GFAPP is difficult to connect with emotionally or intellectually, beyond fleeting glimpses of the ghost of a more exciting text haunting the stage.

REVIEW: Just Fall Over


Rating: 4 out of 5.

The perfect show for those that love a little spice with their tragedy.


Just Fall Over is a captivating tragicomedy. A dysfunctional family gathers to turn off the life support for Sarah, daughter, sister, niece, and best friend, after 10 years in a coma. Brought to life by a gifted cast, Just Fall Over is one to watch at this year’s Camden Fringe.

The script is wonderful. Gracie Bradley and Belle Hobbs have created a truly original and impactful story. The dialogue flows nicely and the characters feel truly alive. Their ability to smoothly blend a rather tragic storyline with comedy is incredible. To devastate the audience with the tragedy of life one moment and to have them doubled over laughing the next is an incredible skill. Having writers direct their own shows can be hit or miss, but it was an absolute success in the case of Bradley and Hobbs. Their vision came to life and the audience lapped it up.

Each of the actors that made up that cast brought something unique to the table. Bronwyn Davies demonstrated a mastery of naturalism as Katie. Her emotional range and level-headed performance contrasted brilliantly to the more over the top characters. Belen Sophia was Davies’ polar opposite as the Nurse; very clearly a gifted comedian, she created a caricature of a character that absolutely worked. Sophia’s performance was hilariously obscene. Lucas Carlyon was interesting as Gregory, Sarah’s privileged younger brother. A little rough around the edges initially, he demonstrated great potential, perfectly straddling the tragicomedy line. 

Belle Hobbs was a tad confusing as Felicity, the self-centered mother of Sarah and Gregory. Her acting was over the top, as made sense for her character, but she put on this strange accent that undermined her ability. Nonetheless, it faded by the end and she delivered one of the most memorable monologues of the piece. Gracie Bradley, another talented actress troubled one little issue. As Linda, Sarah’s aunt and Felicity’s sister, she was stiff and so hidden behind her hair that you couldn’t see her face but her character was strong and her delivery effective. Bradley and Hobbs had the best chemistry. Their bickering, conflicted, and tumultuous relationship largely drove the show. Both funny and sad, it was their play off each other that helped to make the show so successful.

Just Fall Over is one of those shows that just won’t fall off. A little rough around the edges with a few line stumbles, some iffy set pieces, and an opening song that went on a bit too long, it’s definitely a show to watch out for.